Friday, September 30, 2011

ADDITIONAL DIALOGUE FOR ANDREA AND BILL


Most ot the scenes involving these two characters take place in fragmented flashbacks. Full scenes (some written and possibly some improvs) will be shot and then sliced and diced for the final effect. Below are two scenes that will definitely be shot in full and possibly used in their totality.

BILL SCENE

BILL
Look, I don’t know what to say to you. I’m sorry. I know you’ve been hurt before and this was really wrong but…

JANE
You know that I’ve been hurt before. You know. You know.
You don’t know. You don’t know anything. I trusted you. I gave you – Forget it. Why talk about it? There’s just nothing else to – Forget it.

BILL
Wait a minute. You can’t just turn it off like that. I know I made a mistake but –

JANE
A mistake? You fucked my friend in my house on my bed and you say “mistake:.

BILL
Damn it. I’m trying to talk to you. I’m sorry. I know you have every right to be pissed at me, but – it was just because she was walking around naked and trying to --- I know it was stupid and there’s no excuse, but please baby, you gotta give me another chance. I love you. I really love you. I promise I’ll make it work. Just give me one more chance.


ANDREA SCENE

ANDREA
You know, I really think you should get out more. It’s been two years since your divorce. I know it was a disaster but come on…
JANE
Look, I appreciate what you’re trying to do, but…

ANDREA
What, but:? You have to take a chance again sometime.

JANE
Easy for you to say.

ANDREA
Look, I know I’m just a guest in your house and I don’t want to make myself unwelcome, but I really think it would be good for you to get out into the world and try to meet somebody. There’s no way you’re going to make your life better by watching the same old movie over and over again.

JANE
That “old movie” has helped me get through a lot of crap. It’s really been –

Jane notices that Andrea is giving her a look as if to say “That’s really sad” and she stops her rant.

JANE
OK. OK. I’ll get out.

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